Could you be my answer
Could you tell me that I am
The perfect one for you
You’re the perfect one for me
Could you be too faithful
Could you show me anymore
It’s the perfect thing to do
It’s the perfect thing for me
On and on I see you
The life that comes together
To see that we’re forever
On and on I see you
The times we’ve spent together
The times that last forever
And now we will find our way
It’s the way that we’ll find this day
And I know you belong to me
12 comments:
yeah. bytheway thats not a good idea. cause the people might take it offensive...
but if you wrote it, then it shouldn't be...
well i like the idea. i guess....
but still....
nice try.
i totally agree...
thats a good one.
but maybe you should right with more thought. no offense. i liked it but it would be fun if we wrote poems together don't you think?
oh my goodness lets do that.
shall i tutor you? or we can share ideas.
ok. just phone me up.
#010-4762-3978
with love,
Caaaaaar.
huh?
i loved the poem. thats weird.
i thought it was p.e.r.f.e.c.t!
good job tori.
yeah... who are all these people?
good job! infact. i seconed the perfect comment.
No!
i just meant. that it would be fun if we wrote poems together because she knows me! im crazy about it! i didn't mean it to be offensive. sorry!
but she knows me so she wouldn't think it that way.
good poem.
love.
C
OHH boy! wow!
many comment. :O
zip ur mouths people!
i should have never started this.
yeah good poem.
LOL.
I didn't write it by the way.
Anitia is a failor on a failboat.
Nice try.
tori...
wow. this is disappointing... you don't remember me?
just call me up and you will see...
wow. thats sad.
and whoes anita?
maybe i should put up one of my poems to prove to you its me, then you'll remember....
yo. tat is tappen. i lik the idea. yo. dawg tat deserves fame. ya man... go out and make ya self famous.
this would rok the world. and i dun lik most of the poems people right these dais. so you gotta youslef some pride right there. make something of it YO.
make ur fan proud.
yo. tat is tappen. i lik the idea. yo. dawg tat deserves fame. ya man... go out and make ya self famous.
this would rok the world. and i dun lik most of the poems people right these dais. so you gotta youslef some pride right there. make something of it YO.
make ur fan proud.
LOL.
I am digging it, yo.
dig deeper YO.
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